Translation Check by Chrouya
===Script: BRS_-_07.ass
Workraw: BRS 07 WR.avi

* ==> Sidenotes when needed

1
*The literal translation says she likes the picture book of the little bird...Not really correcting this because the context for liking the bird goes on in the next sentences*

3
and in the end, its color had become impure.
*I believe it's "in the end". Also, this is a more compact and accurate translation of the sentence.*

4
The dying bird.
(shinde iku = active)

5
A very sad ending.
*Why is this sentence TLed so different?*

20
Our "other selves" will...
*use italic here. And inform the TL of this term*

22
(I can't save Mato if I don't go.)
*The current sentence is ok, this is just for literal reference.*

23
Mato is a mysterious girl.
*the article "a" is missing here. Also, I recommend using mysterious instead.*

24
Feelings like hatred, envy and sorrow hardly exist in her.
*nikushimi = hatred*
*she ends with sorrow here so she continues it in the next sentence.*

25
Instead, she likely hates sorrow itself.
*strong assumption, and contrast by comparing the usage of "hating" in these sentences.* 

29
Those emotions are what make Black Rock Shooter.
*I believe you can say this in English*

31
Black Rock Shooter will undoubtedly defeat our "other selves".
*again. Also the other world isn't mentioned.* 

32
And then we'll never be able to reach Mato there again.
*People get confused if you put her instead of Mato there. The context is that Mato would be stuck there forever.*

38
*just wondering if you want to put "Saya-chan" here. Please tell me @irc what are rules are for suffixes*

47
That voice...Is that you, Yuu?
*just didn't feel like omitting "sono koe"*

48
That mean...That girl is...

51
Stop hurting each other any more!
*space between any and more*

59
Wish strongly that you want to get out of there!

60
Get out... of there?
*she quotes her*

76
She seems nice, but you never really know what's troubling her.
*sad, but I can't hear what she says in the second part*

77
It's like, she's cheerful, but it feels like she won't open her heart to others.

78
*seems ok, although not everyone knows the verb to whitewash, maybe change it to*
Yeah, exactly. She covers it up quite a bit.

80
I thought she'd be lonely as her father leaves on business trip constantly,
*mistranslation of some words*

98
Although I did it so I wouldn't be hurt

99
Because I didn't want to be hated.

105
I'm sure...

144
Your...Strength?
*maybe italic Strength here. I finally get the plot twist here.*

148
Self-study
(jishuu = self-study)

245 
*if you italic that Why was I... part, italic this part as well*